In the last 30 days, Rohan had not slept soundly for a single night. The incident had been haunting him like a nightmare, even during the days now. He stopped going to work, for the voices in his office seemed to scream in his head just one thing – revenge.
He had collated the pictures and details of the people related to the incident even in the smallest possible way. The red in the ledger has to be wiped off.
Rohan had been looking at the pinboard hard, almost the entire night, going over everything again and again. He knew he was missing out something. There was something not adding up. He was determined to find the missing piece in the puzzle.
Rohan was certain, his brother did not commit suicide.
He was murdered!
(Word Count: 133)
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Whoa. Thatβs a chilling take. Good write.
Thanks Lavanya. Glad you liked it. Cheers! π
Wow! That is brilliant, Rashi!
Youβve left me wanting more. I hope you take this forward.
Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction
Thanku so much Mayuri. M so glad u liked and enjoyed it. You are encouraged to write more when get a feedback so motivating. Looking forward to an engaging prompt this week too. Thanks so much for reading. Cheers! π
This is superb. Good one.
Thanku so much for reading Gaurav. So glad u enjoyed it. Motivates me much. π Cheers!
Rashi, you wrote it so crisp. Even with 100 words, it sounded complete. Nailed it. Happy to join you on MFA.
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Thanku so much Alpana. So glad you enjoyed reading. Happy to be here too. Happy reading π cheers!
This one has potential to be spun into a longer yarn. Good one.
Thanku so much Varad. This is what came to me looking at the image. Didn’t think earlier, but thinking of taking this further, as many ppl have asked for more. Thanks for reading and encouraging me to go ahead with the story π Cheers!
but why? I want to know more.. please
Beautiful
Smart Rohan! Good take on the prompt, Rashi.
Thanks Varsh. Thanks for reading π cheers!
That’s a tantalising bit of story telling. I’d like to know what comes next.
Thanks a lot Obsessivemom (sorry, don’t know your name). As this was for #fridayfotofiction I didn’t really think of the story ahead. But, I would now definitely think on this. Thanks for the encouragement. Cheers! π
Iβve said it beforeβIβm jealous you can tell a story with so few words.
What happens next?
Thank you Cheryl. I’ve read your pieces and there is so much to learn. In fact, soon gonna buy your book on writing too. Didn’t think of writing further on this as was for a photo prompt. But, now I will, coz of the encouragement I’m getting from my fellow bloggers. Thanku so much. Cheers π
Rohan has lot of work ahead to look for the murderer, That would be an interesting read. Nice take on prompt.I love thrillers and murder mysteries.
Haha.. yeah, Rohan is totally engrossed. Thanku so much for reading, Aesha. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Cheers!
That sounds very intriguing, would love to know what happens next
Thanks Sonia. Though initially just for the prompt, now thinking of writing further. π Cheers!
Atleast a part of the puzzle is solved now, though the road ahead is not going to be easy. Nice take
Thanku so much, Akshata. π
Written in a supebbbbbb manner ..
Thanks a lot Ruchi. Cheers! π
I was just reminded of Aamir Khan in 3 idiots when he tells Virus: βyeh suicide nahi murder thaβ. Nice!
Haha.. thanks for reading Ashwin. Cheers! π
Hope there would be next part to it. Nice take on the photo prompt.
Thanks Disha. Didn’t think of a second apart earlier. But, thinking now. Hopefully. Do visit again. Cheers π
Thanks Disha. Didn’t think of a second apart earlier. But, thinking now. Hopefully. Do visit again. Cheers π
Well..what happened next? I was like βNo do not end it hereβ, u kept me of edge with ur writing! I would love to know what happened nextβ¦!
M so glad you enjoyed the post Keerthi π would keep you posted when the remaining part is out. Keep visiting. Cheers! π
When one is that certain, I think they’d be obsessed with it, no doubt. π Seems like a sequel is warranted.
Yeah, Vinay. Initially, written only for the prompt, now thinking of taking the story ahead. Thanks for the encouragement. Glad you liked the post. Cheers! π
WOW. The last sentence was a hard hitter. Need a sequel to his fotofiction.
Thanks again, Brinda. Yeah, will now take the story further. π
Rashi this is the best take on the prompt I have read so far. A mystery has always excited me.
Thanks much Geethica. M so glad you enjoyed my story. Cheers! π
Now I want to know more. A great story in just a few words. Brilliant.
Thanks much, Deepa. The story was just for the prompt. But, thanks for your encouragement I’m surely going to continue with it. Stay tuned. Cheers! π
Very nice…..hope he is able to solve it
Thanks, Monika. Hope so too. Cheers! π
Now his task is to find out who the culprit is. Nice one. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction
Thanks for reading, Tina. Happy to link up with #fridayfotofiction. Hope to continue doing so too. Cheers!
Youβve developed a very interesting plot. I hope someday it culminates into a full length story.
Thanks much, Niket. Though, murder mysteries aren’t my forte, I am thinking of continuing with this one. Have got a lot of encouragement from fellow bloggers like you. Thanks again. Cheers!
This is such an interesting take on the prompt. I feel like knowing what further now.
Thanku so much, Manisha. Written for the prompt initially, now I am thinking of developing it further. Keep reading. Cheers!
Very nice flow of words π
Thanks much, Sushmita. Happy Reading. Cheers! π
Would love to know what Rohan did next. Loved the way you have written it .. Do continue the series.
Thanks much, Neha. yeah, thinking of continuing the story. Keep visiting. Happy reading. Cheers!
Revenge is a very intriguing emotion. It leaves you amidst so many unanswered questions that even for a reader life becomes another form of restlessness. Thatβs where you left me !
Thanks, Anupriya. You have given me something more for the story. There are a few comments where the blogger also learns and this is one of them. Thanks much yaa. Cheers! π
Hi Rashi! Lovely story and even lovlier the coincidence that both of us dealt with this prompt in a similar way. Detective ,,,,mystery:) Wonderful! Keep writing! Love and Cheers!
Thanks much, Tina. oh great. That definitely is a lovely coincidence. I like your writing style. Cheers! π