Flash Fiction

The Nightmares! #FridayFotoFiction

In the last 30 days, Rohan had not slept soundly for a single night. The incident had been haunting him like a nightmare, even during the days now. He stopped going to work, for the voices in his office seemed to scream in his head just one thing – revenge.

He had collated the pictures and details of the people related to the incident even in the smallest possible way. The red in the ledger has to be wiped off.

Rohan had been looking at the pinboard hard, almost the entire night, going over everything again and again. He knew he was missing out something. There was something not adding up. He was determined to find the missing piece in the puzzle.

Rohan was certain, his brother did not commit suicide.

He was murdered!

(Word Count: 133)

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Author: rashi mital

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56 Comments on “The Nightmares! #FridayFotoFiction

    1. Thanku so much Mayuri. M so glad u liked and enjoyed it. You are encouraged to write more when get a feedback so motivating. Looking forward to an engaging prompt this week too. Thanks so much for reading. Cheers! 🙂

    1. Thanku so much Varad. This is what came to me looking at the image. Didn’t think earlier, but thinking of taking this further, as many ppl have asked for more. Thanks for reading and encouraging me to go ahead with the story 🙂 Cheers!

    1. Thanks a lot Obsessivemom (sorry, don’t know your name). As this was for #fridayfotofiction I didn’t really think of the story ahead. But, I would now definitely think on this. Thanks for the encouragement. Cheers! 🙂

    1. Thank you Cheryl. I’ve read your pieces and there is so much to learn. In fact, soon gonna buy your book on writing too. Didn’t think of writing further on this as was for a photo prompt. But, now I will, coz of the encouragement I’m getting from my fellow bloggers. Thanku so much. Cheers 🙂

    1. M so glad you enjoyed the post Keerthi 🙂 would keep you posted when the remaining part is out. Keep visiting. Cheers! 🙂

    1. Yeah, Vinay. Initially, written only for the prompt, now thinking of taking the story ahead. Thanks for the encouragement. Glad you liked the post. Cheers! 🙂

    1. Thanks much, Deepa. The story was just for the prompt. But, thanks for your encouragement I’m surely going to continue with it. Stay tuned. Cheers! 🙂

    1. Thanks much, Niket. Though, murder mysteries aren’t my forte, I am thinking of continuing with this one. Have got a lot of encouragement from fellow bloggers like you. Thanks again. Cheers!

    1. Thanku so much, Manisha. Written for the prompt initially, now I am thinking of developing it further. Keep reading. Cheers!

  1. Revenge is a very intriguing emotion. It leaves you amidst so many unanswered questions that even for a reader life becomes another form of restlessness. That’s where you left me !

    1. Thanks, Anupriya. You have given me something more for the story. There are a few comments where the blogger also learns and this is one of them. Thanks much yaa. Cheers! 🙂

    1. Thanks much, Tina. oh great. That definitely is a lovely coincidence. I like your writing style. Cheers! 🙂

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